高考英語(yǔ)議論文復(fù)習(xí)寫作課件

1、議論文（ 觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型、各抒己見型）,觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型1.提綱式作文：按照表格或提示言之有序，老師是找點(diǎn)給分的。2.開放式作文：找到最本質(zhì)的特征。思維訓(xùn)練模式：a. listing; b. reasoning; c. brain storm.,作文常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,表示時(shí)間關(guān)系：first, second, then, finally/at

2、last／in the end , soon， immediately, suddenly, at the same time, meanwhile, recently表示對(duì)稱順序關(guān)系：for one thing….. for the other thing, on one hand,…..on the other hand，above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, next, final

3、ly，the former….the latter, 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：what is more, as well, moreover, besides ,furthermore, in addition，what’s worse表示換一種方式表達(dá)：in other words ,that is to say,,,表示舉例說明：for example, like, such as, for instance 表示陳述事實(shí)：in fac

4、t ,actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth表示總結(jié)：on the whole, in a word, to sum up, in short, in conclusion, from what I have said above表示因果關(guān)系：as a result ,thus, therefore, so that, as, because, consequent

5、ly,表示轉(zhuǎn)折：but, however, while, instead, although, different from, not only ..but also表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)：in my opinion, personally, as far as I know, I believe, I think, as we all know ,It is known to us all that….,范例1：假如你事實(shí)李華，你班同學(xué)最

6、近開長(zhǎng)了一場(chǎng)討論，主題是：高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．,,1.關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)體育鍛煉做早操增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)減少疾病休息學(xué)習(xí)有效果浪費(fèi)時(shí)間投入學(xué)習(xí)受傷,take exercisesdo morning exercisesbuild up the bodyreduce the diseasehave a reststudy more effectively

7、a waste of time pay attention to studybe hurt,2.作文結(jié)構(gòu),,,1.….have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins./Different students have differe

8、nt ideas .2.55%of the students think………….such as(舉例)……..（原因）…..3.On the other hand,45% of the students believe…….(原因）……..4.In my opinion, I prefer to,3.范文：　 Recently , we have had a discussion about whether have had

9、 a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins. 55%of the students think they should take all kinds of exercises every day ,such as doing morn

10、ing exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,” all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. "Exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of di

11、seases. Sports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective. On the other hand,45% of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After taking exercise, they are too ex

12、cited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And it’s possible to be hurt in sports.　In my opinion, I prefer to take proper exercises in my spare time.,練習(xí)１：“你們班會(huì)的討論主題是“上大學(xué)是高中生唯一的出路嗎？”請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的信息．寫一偏短文，客觀的介紹

13、下討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．,關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)：widen knowledge, improve qualities, high tuition, senior students關(guān)鍵句子：６０％of us consider it necessary to go to college 10% of students think it no use going to college

14、 30% believe “All roads lead to Rome.”,范例2：某中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)社正開展一場(chǎng)題為“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，向該報(bào)社投稿。,注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；2．短文必須包含表格的全部?jī)?nèi)容。要求觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，緊湊連貫,學(xué)生作品1：

15、 Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers. There are some reasons below. For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching. They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but

16、 also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers! For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience. This is also the most

17、important, especially for us senior students. This is only my opinion. I think young teachers are also good.,點(diǎn)評(píng)：亮點(diǎn)：1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明，詞匯句型的運(yùn)用比較靈活2、過渡詞及連詞的使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連貫、條理清楚。,2、審題不全面，忽略了對(duì)青年教師這部分信息的處理。這一點(diǎn)是比較大的失誤。,,,∧,,,1),2),3)

18、,1) Compared,2) more,3) try to make the classes lively and interesting,不足之處：,1、個(gè)別地方的表達(dá)需要改進(jìn)。,學(xué)生作品2: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students who like the elderlyteachers more than the young on

19、es think thatthe elderly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience. However, the others have a differentopinion. They think the teachers who areyoung are f

20、ull of energy. Besides, theirteaching is lively and they dare to bring inthe new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderlyteachers and the young ones because fromthem we both can learn a lot.,,點(diǎn)評(píng)：亮點(diǎn)：

21、1、段落清楚，要點(diǎn)齊全，句式表達(dá)比較靈活，能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用復(fù)句。2、過渡詞運(yùn)用也比較熟練。,需要改進(jìn)的地方：,1）,,,,2),3),＼,,,4),1) prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones,2) with explanations,3) the 去掉,4) The young teachers,One possible version: Opinions a

22、re divided on this question. Some students may like elderly teachers' teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations. Ho

23、wever, I prefer to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends as well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more .energetic and enthusiastic. Usually they can m

24、ake their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and eff

25、ectively. In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.,練習(xí)２：人們對(duì)于網(wǎng)上交友持不同的意見．請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇學(xué)生網(wǎng)上教友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)．,關(guān)鍵詞：make friends ,express feeling freely ,foreign studies, a waste of time, get cheated onli

26、ne. 關(guān)鍵句子：Students should place their study ,health ,and safety before other things .,2001年高考書面表達(dá),假設(shè)你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友Dick聽說中國(guó)的中小學(xué)正在減輕學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，來(lái)信詢問有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一封回信，談一談減負(fù)給你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來(lái)的變化。,2001年高考書面表達(dá),Dear Dick, How ni

27、ce to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don’t know about others, but I used to hav

28、e to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the eve

29、nings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.

30、 Best wishes, Li Hua,2002年高考書面表達(dá),最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。,,Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you about th

31、e discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be

32、free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do har

33、m to the appearance of a city.On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be

34、 charged low. Yours truly, Li Hua,觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立型寫作模板,1.正反觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比 The topic about 話題 is becoming more and more po

35、pular in 范圍 recently. There are two sides of opinion about it. Some people prefer to consider doing sth.They think that 理由一，what's more,理由二，moreover,理由三。 However,others belive 觀點(diǎn)is a better choice for free

36、reasons. To begin with, 理由一，next，理由二，inaddition, 理由三。 From my point of view, the formmer is surely a wise choice. The reason is that 原因。,,2.優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)對(duì)比 In recent years, 所要討論的問題has been popular. There are many advantag

37、es in …First, 優(yōu)點(diǎn)一，second，優(yōu)點(diǎn)二，third，優(yōu)點(diǎn)三。 However，there are some disadvantages. First, 缺點(diǎn)一，besides，缺點(diǎn)二，also，缺點(diǎn)三。 In my opinion, it is true that advantages are more than disadvantages. I think 自己的觀點(diǎn)。,各抒己見型議論文,要注意

38、的幾個(gè)問題：1.主題句的問題。2.段落銜接的問題，要有過渡句。3.論據(jù)到底應(yīng)分幾點(diǎn)來(lái)說？ 典型、 精煉4.議論文一定要有架構(gòu)意識(shí)。,2007 山東省高考書面表達(dá),今年，教育部直屬師范大學(xué)將招收一批免費(fèi)師范生，學(xué)生畢業(yè)后須回生源所在省份的中小學(xué) 任教十年以上，你愿意成為一名免費(fèi)師范生嗎？請(qǐng)陳述理由。,Yes, I want to be such a student. First, it goes without sa

39、ying that a four-term-free pay will set me free from the high tuition, which is usually to be a heavy financial burden for my family.Then, I could entirely throw myself into my study. Second, I love teaching and have

40、 a long-cherished dream to be a teacher. I maintain that nothing can give me more pleasure than teaching because I am eager to see my students make progress and be the backbone of our country in the future. Moreover, to

41、be a teacher is one part of my duties that I should do.By doing this I can make good contributions to our country’s education. Therefore, I take great pride to do that and I will do the best I can do and be the best